utopia

yellow-highlighted part is the thesis & bolded letter are comments/feedbacks from my teacher

1. thesis should talk about how More and Utopia changed the world
2. Stay in the “literary” present tense
3. be clearer and more concise in places.
4. Clearer arguments and more evidence.
5. Go into how Utopia/More changed the world.
6. Please look the the comments, fix, and delete it

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